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August 5th, 2007

Chapter 1 - Page 1

In which Our Heroine freaks herself out whilst writing in her journal.


NOTES

Glad I didn’t write actual words in panel three — I probably rewrote all Jenn’s internal monologue/journal scribblings three or four times before settling on what you see here.

Jenn’s look of alarm in the next to last panel was swapped in maybe a couple of weeks or so after I originally posted the page. The original image was a lot like panel 2, except not as good and exceptionally unnatural-looking. The parallel between the image in her mind and the shot of her reaction is much better!

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