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August 9th, 2007

Chapter 1 - Page 5

In which Leonard Rakyl introduces himself and gives Our Heroine a creepy look.


NOTES

I hate, hate, hate, hate, hate this page from the planet hate. Everyone either looks ugly or weird, and that panel of Leonard in the lower left hand corner was redrawn twice and still needed some major digital tweaks to pass muster.

I do kind of like that final panel, though, even though it looks nothing like Leonard.

Dani has no lines in her hair. I think this is the only time that’s the case until she mounts her motorscooter a few pages from now. (OH NOES, SPOILER!) I went back and fixed that for a lot of panels, but not this one, mostly because I am lazy and don’t care.

And did I mention that I hate this page? Because I do. Really.

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